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Look at the boy,dressed in black,
His soul is so divine.
Though his clothes are dark,his soul is white
But you treat him like a swine.

He could save so many lives,
With a heart so pure.
He wishes someone would save him,
His depression needs a cure.

Tears stream down his face.
Nobody ever listens.
All he wants is to be loved.
Wearing black is not sinning.

You call him "emo"
You call him "goth"
He was on top of the world,
But thanks to you,he jumped off....
©2008-2009 ~Noahthemessenger
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Just a poem showing my views of how people are treated.

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WOW!! This is a really great poem!! It's not over-written and easy to understand, but it still sounds beautiful and makes its point!! It flows and there are no spelling or grammar errors I noticed. (Don't ask me about commas, I have tons of comma errors!) <XD Definately a favorite of mine!! :love::love::love:

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